Advert draft

This is a draft of our advertisement, a text that we completed but didn't quite fulfil the standards we expected, i have posted it here as a demonstration of the curve of progress toward the final, finished advert.

This draft was before we decided to get audience feedback. We knew that something needed changing as we thought that the whole composition of the peice connoted a loosely planned idea. Fortunately we decided to change almost everything about it and are glad we did so. The actual image of the main character frowning, juxtaposed against the loose tie and party blower, does show the contrast we wanted to convey but doesn't have the clean cut finesse of an actual conventional magazine advert.